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Thursday, June 25, 2020

space story

Space story today I have just finished writing a story about space. Last Thursday we started making story's about space. On my last blog post I have showed you my plan for this story. If you would like you can read it. we have worked very hard on theses story's the story of mine includes a title settings a problem and a solution also a plot. hope you enjoy.
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  1. AnonymousJune 25, 2020 at 10:13 AM

    HI BILLIE HOW A AMAZING IS THAT BUT NEXT TIME ADD ME IN IT BECAUSE MY NAME IS COOLER THAN YOUR (Jk) BY BREE KITSON

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  2. AnonymousJune 26, 2020 at 12:22 PM

    Talofa lava Billie, My name is Faith and I am from Waikowhai primary school. I loved the way you wrote your cool writing it had so much expression which I loved. It was awesome commenting on your blog post about Coco and Emma going to the moon. I wouldn't want to go to the moon because I'm too scared. Maybe next time you could add some more paragraphs so I could read more of your awesome writing. Also it would be cool if you can visit my blog at http://wpsfaithm.blogspot.com/ .It was very fun and cool sharing your learning with me. Blog you later!

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